TUESDAY
6/6/22
An overcast day. Lawrence spends the morning writing most
of section #4, MS pp 34-51 (about 3800 words), starting
with chapter ii "Neighbours", and recording
the events of the first Sunday - the excursion to Manly
and Narrabeen, and the car trip back to town. It is his
habit, as he indicates in Kangaroo, to write in
the morning, after his breakfast chores. [...He always
got up in the morning, made the fire, swept the room,
and tidied roughly. Then he brought in coal and wood,
made the breakfast, and did any little out-door job. After
breakfast he helped to wash up, and settled the fire.
Then he considered himself free to his own devices...]
This usually meant going into the front garden of "Wyewurk",
leaning against the wall of the verandah, and filling
one of the exercise books he bought in Ceylon with his
easy, fluent script (as if, as one observer had earlier
noted, he were taking dictation). No hint yet in chapter
ii of any secret army plot, though this must be already
fermenting in his consciousness. However, he has plenty
earlier to write about before he reaches Jack Scott's
secret-army revelations the previous Sunday or Monday.
WEDNESDAY 7/6/22
Another busy writing day. In the morning between 9am and
noon he probably writes section #5 of his text - about
3000 words (MS pp 52-66), from the trip back to town in
chapter ii, to the start of chapter iii, "Larbord
Watch Ahoy!". He has written about 12,000 words in
two, or perhaps three, days. (He has a lot to "catch
up", for he is still some distance "behind the
action".) Throughout the novel he averages between
3500 and 4500 words per writing session. After lunch he
probably spends the rest of the day pottering around,
and perhaps going for walks along McCauley's Beach, below
"Wyewurk", with Frieda.
THURSDAY 8/6/22
(A crucial day.) Lawrence travels up to Sydney today to
rendezvous with Jack Scott at his office in Pitt Street,
then walks with him up Hoskins Place to Rosenthal's chambers
at 8 Mendes Chambers in Castlereagh Street. He has lunch
with Rosenthal and Scott. Before or after lunch, he probably
picks up his mail at Cooks. He returns to Thirroul by
the late commuter-train. However, he must have fitted
in some writing today (maybe in the early morning), for
it is likely he writes section #4 - ie, most of chapter
iii, "Larboard Watch Ahoy!" (section #4 - MS
pp 67-86: about 4000 words). The purpose of the lunch
is to sound Lawrence out about a possible writing or editing
job on the K&E Alliance's monthly journal, following
the departure for overseas of their main propagandist,
George Augustine Taylor. [
"I hope you are
going to write something for us."
] For
Lawrence, however, the object of the meeting is to continue
gathering material for the novel they do not realise he
has decided to write about them. By now - just over a
week after he started writing, and three chapters already
written - Lawrence decides to call the novel "Kangaroo",
and for its principal Australian character to be Benjamin
Cooley (based on Charles Rosenthal).
FRIDAY 9/6/22
Lawrence probably writes about 3500 words today (section
#5: MS pp 87-104), from the start of chapter iv "Jack
and Jaz", to the chat opposite Mosman wharf. He also
writes a number of letters (in response to the mail he
picked up in Sydney yesterday). He tells his agent Mountsier
that his new novel is going well [
at a great
rate
], and will be finished by August (however,
he has only £31 left - so he might indeed have been
tempted by a job-offer from Scott and Rosenthal). He tells
his mother-in-law that it's [
a weird novel of
Australia...]. He tells his U.S. publisher Seltzer
it's going well [
but no sex
]. He tells
his future hostess in Taos, Mable Dodge, that it's [
a
queer novel
] and that he might do something
similar in America. (He probably writes his five letters
in the evening.) The weather is still balmy (66 degrees
at midday).
